- Stabilising the first bed shot, removing the jerk on the zooming out phase.
- Walking down the stair scene - re shoot scene getting in three different shots including close ups of the framed pictures.
- Include lip syncing or show someone playing the guitar. We came up with the idea if a busker playing the guitar in the street, but without any strings on his instrument.
- The freeze frame of the character being run over could replace the looking through the window scene, working well with the sound of the car crash.
- Instead of using the car crash incident from the television programmes "Skins", we could film our own and have it being played on the television.
- We found a potential of applying the heartbeat monitor lines onto the blank piece of paper, making the scene more interesting and weird.
- Shorten screaming, chiaroscuro scenes as they lose their effect as we've played them too long.
- Needing to change the car park setting as it means there are people around, getting the total opposite effect and meaning we are going for.
- Add a scene of the driver getting out of the car earlier in the production, building a story for the viewer.
- Applying a red sky effect to the walking across the Mead's scene. The red sky will darken as he gets closer to the building, walking towards death or danger?
- Remove the laying on the ground scene inside the house from the rewind sequence as it doesn't relate to the story what so ever.
Monday, 12 December 2011
Production Progress - 12th December
Thursday, 8 December 2011
Production Progress - 8th December
Monday, 21 November 2011
Production Progress - 17th November
The image above shows Ashley and Jon position both camera and character in the perfect place to capture the leaves as the fall, whilst I climbed on top of a small bricked building with a bundle of leaves beside me, seen in the picture. As we filmed, out of the way, I threw the leaves in to the air in short bursts making it look as if the leaves were really falling from the tree. The whole idea of this shot is again, to bring in the surrealness of our characters life, when will you ever see leaves falling upwards and why?
This is the final result of our chiaroscuro effect on Jon...Monday, 7 November 2011
Production Progress - 7th November
Our group discussion of our first cut feedback.
Friday, 4 November 2011
First Cut Feedback
The feedback is broken into different sections, targeting the main areas of camera work, mise en scene and editing. Here is the feedback we received;
Holding Shot Steady
- First zoom out shot on Ashley - re do without the camera jerk, or use montage to cover the unsteady look.
Framing a Shot
- Good shot to open with (close up of Ash)
Appropriate Material
- Use beat at start of the video to link to suitable visual.
- Corridor shot - emphasise that it is strange - use empty corridor twice
- Improve sots by hedge.
- Approaching pump house, interesting - develop this further.
- Ashley's house boring - change.
- Add shot (school) to blank sheet of paper (dinner table shot) - reference to the "streets" video.
- Good noir shadow as Ashley leaves bed.
- Pictures are good ideas, but don't come across them.
- Last shot - good however, perhaps cover Ash with the sheet.
- Start the music after captions.
- Stress the drama of the eyes opening - sound effect beep.
- Sitting down at the table scene - cut out the empty chair part.
- Good transition to school corridor.
- Good effect - paring action with beat in music.
- Use reverse effect - Ash moving in one direction, other people moving backwards?
- Leaves falling upwards?
- Some good ideas
"Good overall idea, but some shots lack impact - go for more strangeness/ weirdness, build up uncertainty in viewers - can they trust what they are feeling? Colour in last shot is good, use spot colour at other points".
First Cut Production
Production Progress - 31st October
Sunday, 30 October 2011
Production Progress - 27th October
Thursday, 20 October 2011
Production Progress - 17th October
The image below shows the location just out the front our school where the "handing over the keys" scene was filmed.

These images are Jon filming the drive scene on his first lesson back from his trip to America.

Negatives:
- The "x-ray" pictures aren't as clear as we wanted them to be when filming.
- The first shot when the camera is zooming out on Ashley's face as we could only get a suitable shot from balancing on a bed.
Positives:
- The sepia effect which we have added to the scenes we've begun editing look very good.
- The large range of different shots we've used.
Friday, 14 October 2011
Production Progress - 14th October
Ashley uploading the footage...
Thursday, 13 October 2011
Production Progress - 12th October
The images below are evidence of our production progress on the 12th October 2011.
Picture 1 shows a deliberately framed two roomed shot as when our character walks past into to the door on the left, a clip of a car crash incident will be visible on the television, linking back to the character's injury.

Picture 2 shows setting up for the dinner table shot.
The photographs both relate back to our character again, giving hints to the viewer on what has or is going to happen.
Both pictures below show us setting up, preparing to film our "dusty track" shot in Hertford Meads, before the camera battery died.

Monday, 10 October 2011
Production Progress - 10th October
This disater had to be out behind us so we had to produce a smaller production plan to get in the filming which we had lost, as well as the footage we still needed. For the rest of the lesson we added to our blogs.
Production Progress - 6th October
Whilst filming we had trouble filming a specific shot; the empty corridor scene. For this shot we wanted a completely empty corridor, but every time we were about to record, a student or teacher would accidentally get in the way. After a few minutes of waiting we finally got a free space and managed to get the shot done.
Thursday, 29 September 2011
Prop list
Set of keys - This prop will be used in the blurred scene where he is shown to be dropping them.
Drink bottle - The drinks bottle will have all labeling and advertsinging removed from the package and will be used for the reversed flowing water shot.
Basket ball - Will be seen in the gym shot where the ball will seem to be rolling, but nobody is in the room...
Picture frame - including 2 picutres of the car crash related to the story.
TV - showing a repeated car crash, intwing itself with the story.
Lab coat - This prop can be borrowed from the science department of the school and will be used in the hospital scene along with the other medical related props; X-ray photos and a monitor/ laptop.
Production Progress - Thursday 29th September
We filmed our animatic of our music video in Chauncy's new art gallery. We chose this location as it was the least populated part of our school meaning next to no noise.



Monday, 26 September 2011
Location Spotting





26th September 2011 - Monday's lesson


Feedback on blog from Mrs A 26.09.11
- showing more institutional knwoledge of WarnerBros (size of co, what else they do)
- more detailed refs to music video conventions (lip synch, star image, intertextuality, link between lyrics and visuals?)
- conclusion : why is it a successful video and can youtake any ideas from it?
Missing blog entries:
- PP pitch
- production schedule
- summary of progress week beginning 19th Sept - key decisions
Friday, 23 September 2011
Analysis of a Professional Product
- Foals
- Green Day
- Jason Durelo
- Linkin Park
- Klyie Minouge
- Metallica
- Muse
- New Order
- The White Stripes




Monday, 12 September 2011
Knebworth Music Video
Review of Skills Development June - July 2011
During this of analysis period we studied different documentaires. We watched Michael Moore's "Bowling for Columbine" and for a set homework we had to study another documentary. I chose Asif Kapadia's "Senna" as I love the sport Formula 1.

Filming Interviews
Through this stage we learnt the rules of "vox pops";
- Never look directly towards the camera.
- Alternate camera from left to right
- Always ask the same question
- Frame the person correctly using the rule of thirds
We also filmed and edited our own "vox pops" where we went round our school with a camera asking the question "do you think the price of the cinema is to high?" We got varied responses which helped us in editing as it gave us more to work on providing a arguement for both sides.
Music Video Analysis
For the music video analysis we studied different types of music video directors and how the produce their end products. These directors included Chris Cunningham's "Come to daddy" and Bjork's "All this full of love". After studying these directors we produced a power point on a song. I chose Coldplays "the scientists".
Music Video Skills
After analysing music videos we began work on our own skills to helps us produce our own video. To help improve our skills we practiced using the schools green screen. We found a few problems whilst editing our work on the green screen as it was our first time using the software. Another skill we practiced was lip syncing. This was practiced by filming small sections of songs and then editing it on the computer.
Wednesday, 5 January 2011
Props and Location
- 1 cup
- Home phone
- Tie
- Large wooden stick (weapon)

- The chauncy School
- Ashley Morris's house

Influences for the creation
Monday, 3 January 2011
Feedback from first cut
- Lots of camera angles
- Mise en scene (contrast)
- Editing for meaning
- Lighting
- Sound
- 1 out of frame shot
- Unfinished titles
- limited sound elements
- Too dark
Music
Production Schedule
Tuesday 16th November - Storyboard
Wednesday 17th November - Animatic
Thursday 18th November - Shot list
Friday 19th November - Filming
WEEKEND
Monday 22nd November - Capturing and editing
Tuesday 23rd November
Wednesday 24th November - Capturing and editing
Thursday 25th November
Friday 26th November
WEEKEND
Monday 29th November - Editing
Tuesday 30th November
Wednesday 1st December - Editing
Thursday 2nd December
Friday 3rd December
WEEKEND
Monday 6th December - Present rough cut
Tuesday 7th December
Wednesday 8th December - Re-edit and fine tone
Thursday 9th December
Friday 10th December
WEEKEND
Monday 13th December - DEADLINE
Recording Sounds
The second sound we needed to record was of running water for the opening of our scene, the original sound quality wasn't good enough so we used the sinks in the school toilet.
For the death scenes we really wanted our audience to feel the them so we thought by adding really intense sounds would really get them. By finding a few large sticks in nature reserve at our school and breaking them at different speeds gave us an excellent mimic of a neck breaking.
Our group needed one final sound for one of the death scenes, an echoed, but concealed yelp. For this we decided to go right to the back of the stage where we kept recording until we got the perfect sound. It worked well as we used the small staircase which gave us that slight echoing sound.
The final sound my group and I needed to recorded was the sound of footsteps to put over the low quality sound footsteps in the original footage. To get this sound we remained at the stage and used its wooden floors to pitch our sounds. Ashley, one of the group members walked up and down on various areas of the stage whilst Jon and I recorded it until we found the right sound for the job.









