Feedback from first cut

Strong aspects

• Lots of camera angles
• Mise en scene (contrast)
• Editing for meaning
• Lighting
• Sound

Weak aspects

• 1 out of frame shot
• Unfinished titles
• limited sound elements
• Too dark

After receiving our strong and weak aspects we were told we were working at a low level 3 out of 4, which pleased the group. We wanted to gain a higher level so we were set to go back to working on our production looking at our feedback notes.