Use of match on action
The sound isn’t synced up with the knocking on the door
Good use of over the shoulder shot
Varied use of different shots
The camera crosses the line of action as the subject comes to the wrong side of the frame when entering the room
The two person shot needs to be framed a little tighter so the subjects aren’t falling off the screen
There is too much of a jump to the close up shot at the end
You have used titling
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